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Love Notes Editing: Professional Book Editing

Providing developmental, copy, and line editing to elevate your romance novel to its best version.

DANI & JESSICA

SERVICES

Learn more about each service!

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Developmental Edit

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Line and Copy Edit

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Combo Edit

.015/word
.012/word intro special

.02/word
.016/word intro special

.03/word
.024/word intro special

Create stronger and more compelling stories.
This includes plugging plot holes, suggesting missing scenes, eliminating fluff, tightening pacing, and bolstering character development.

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Turnaround time: 3-4 weeks

Let's make those sentences pop!
Word choice, rhythm, syntax, detail consistency, passive voice, and flow all come into play here. 
This is the ultimate cleanup job!

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Turnaround time: 3-4 weeks

Need a developmental edit and a line and copy edit? Book a combo package to receive a discounted rate, and get the benefit of having two editors work on your story.

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Turnaround time: variable by project

OUR CLIENTS

Our extensive client list includes romance writers of all sub-genres.

We specialize in sports, contemporary, romcom, romantic suspense, YA, romantasy, paranormal, and fantasy of all spice levels.

We are open to other sub-genres, as well. These are just a few of our clients!

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THE WITCHING FLOUR by S. Frasher

copy / line edit

by Jessica Booth

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EVERY MOVE YOU MAKE & EVERY VERSION OF YOU by Sloan Spencer

dev edit
by Dani Galliaro

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MY NEIGHBOR IS A WOLF by Delaine Walsh

dev / line edit
by Jessica Booth

Books

FROM OUR CLIENTS

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I loved getting to work with Jessica for my book The Witching Flour. Not only is she positive and energetic, she also knows her stuff and helped me grammatically perfect my book before publishing.

S. FRASHER,
THE WITCHING FLOUR

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Dani provided me excellent developmental editing where she pointed out not only obvious holes, but small moments that needed clarification or elaboration. Her feedback was a great blend of critique and encouragement. I would definitely work with her again! 

SLOAN SPENCER, EVERY VERSION
OF YOU

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Jessica was so easy to work with. She has an eye for detail and communicated clearly with me throughout the whole editing process. She even took the time to explain specific edits when I asked her about them. I've already hired her to clean up a previous edit and can't wait to work with her again.

DELAINE WALSH, MY NEIGHBOR
IS A WOLF

In The Press

WHO WE ARE

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Dani Galliaro is a stack of ferrets in a trench coat, hunched over a keyboard pecking out stories about normies falling in love. 

 

She has a Bachelor of Arts in English that against all odds, is now proving useful. Originally from West Virginia, Dani did her time writing and editing for cool magazines and newspapers, as well as interviewing C-suite executives for their corporate websites. She can be found yelling at hockey on TV in Southwest Ohio with her husband, kids, and hissy little hedgehog. 

Jessica Booth is a lifelong reader and writer who pens small town and magical realism romance.

 

She has a Bachelor of Arts in Communications and Professional Writing, and spent more than 17 years as a journalist and features editor. A North Louisiana native, Jessica now resides in Southwest Ohio with her husband, pack of rowdy children, and a couple of hounds. They love to spend their time visiting indie bookstores, or outside digging up worms and transforming piles of sticks into castles. 

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